Writing

We are learning in Writing work shop to youse punctuation in our story's

List sentence

Dialogue sentence

Clause sentence

Direct speech sentence

The people in this story are Shrek,goat,God,baby,Ronald mcDonald,donkey.

Late at night I saw a candy man I said that looks like Shrek riding a donkey but it wasn't a donkey, it was Shrek is life and I just died but I didn't die I saw Santa with Ronald mcDonald I went and asked Santa“is Ronald mcDonald your son? no." He's god's son,God just killed a fat goat  riding a skateboard,.then we all said what the hot dog.we saw a baby driving a car running over everybody so Santa throwed c4 onto the car 321 boom!

“Dude said God"

“what said Ronald mc Donald"

“Can you make me a happy meal"

“This is no time for happy meal hulk Smash"

“Santa said no" and jumped in front of god and hulks hand rebounded of his Bally.